Monday, October 20, 2008

Final Journal Entry


Description of the Photo

Version 1:

A boy is laughing when his picture was taken. There are pillows and bed in the photo. It must be taken in a bedroom of someone. The age of the boy is 2 and a half year old and he is my nephew. The boy is laughing perhaps because he was playing with someone when the picture was taken. There is light in the room. It shows that the picture was taken during a bright sunny day.

Version 2:

The picture was taken by my sister. She was playing with the boy in the picture who is our nephew. She loves taking his picture while entertaining him. They were in my room. There was no one else in the room except for themselves. The picture was taken at about 1 o'clock in the evening and that is why there is a bright sunlight in the picture.

Combination of the 2 versions:

On one bright sunny day, my sister was busy entertaining and playing with my nephew. We were just moving to our new house at that time. It had been two weeks at that time. Everything was settled and unpacked except for some stuffs that belong to me. I had not much time. I put all the pillows and my other stuffs on my double Decker.
It was fasting month. My mother and my elder sisters are all busy cooking and preparing food for breakfasting. Thus, there was no one to entertain my nephew. Therefore, my younger sister decided to play with him. My nephew loves it when his picture is taken by someone. And after that, he would ask to take a look at the picture.
My sister is always ready with her camera phone. She would take his picture at every angle. My nephew would laugh whenever his picture is about to be shoot. They enjoy playing with each other.

Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Journal Entry 5

Imagine being a child prodigy who is not understood by people around you. You long for friendship and a normal life.
Write a poem describing your life.

UNDERSTAND

U - Understand my needs, my desire,
N - Never abandon me as I need your guidance,
D - Do hear what I've got to say,
E - Easy on me, I'm not a robot, I'm learning,
R - Re-teach me if I do wrong, I'm an ordinary human and make mistakes,
S - Support me if I fall,
T - Tell me what should I do, don't order me,
A - Answer me if I'm asking, I want to satisfy my curiosity,
N - Never leave me in the dark,
D - Dream with me, you'll know better me.

As how you want they understand you,
Me need someone too,
Just like you,
Know myself,
What my mind wants,
Don't give me wounds,
I need your treatment.

Poem 5 (Activity 5 - Receiving A Postcard)

TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN

Sandy white beach,
Clean water,
They dived better
than us,
You saw together,
witness.

Don't you miss the good old days,
When everything was really amazed,
Like the picture,
We long for such place,
Give back to us,
Do not erase,
Won't you miss everything displaced?

This is what we learn,
Human make mistakes,
So does it can be turned,
To whom it may concern,
Please don't let it happen..

Poem 4 (Activity 4 - Sending A Postcard)

I SAW SEA SHELL ON THE SEA SHORE

I saw sea shell on the sea shore,
But now it is not like before,
I wonder what had happened,
Does it disappear?
Or too upset with the development?

She sold sea shell on the sea shore,
She now no longer there,
The business is no more,
Everything ruined, she couldn't bare.

We beg you,
Don't dirty the place,
We ask you,
Don't be disgrace,
Let us start with a pace,
And together we make it paradise..

Poem 3 (Activity 3 - Receiving A Postcard)


SO I THINK I CAN DANCE

Hey friend! Still remember me?
We once met by the sea,
I was alone, you came accompany,
Knowing you made me free.

I was upset with what happened,
U were saying something, strengthened
my feeling,
I can forget her that made me angry,
I found someone that makes me happy.

At times I was dancing alone,
It was awful,
Like a song with no tone,
But now she is here,
We dance together,
Thanks to you,
I became greater.

My wooden leg is here no more,
Give it no chance,
To be like before,
So I think I can dance.

Sunday, September 21, 2008

Poem 2 (Activity 2 - Sending A Postcard)


DANCING KING

We used to dance together,
Before I became a loner,
Mow I'm dancing much happier,
Without you as my partner.

I saw therm dancing happily,
They laughed and kissed hindsight of me,
Jealousy is not in my dictionary,
Don't you hope I'm begging you coming back to me.

All by myself,
I was dancing,
No discipline,
No nothing,
I now can move freely,
The picture of the man is just like me,
Can't you see,
I'm smiling.

I don't car much of the surrounding,
Why, you ask?
I'm the dancing king..

Saturday, September 20, 2008

Poem 1 (Exclusive Place)

MR. HALL

O' Mr. Hall,
or should I call you by your full name,
Living Hall..

It's the place for all,
My family gathers,
We love, cry and fall,
You are the witness,
O' Mr. Hall..

While watching television,
I might fall asleep,
You keep me sleeping,
Till I awake,
You blow me wind,
Me fly wings,
In my dream..